Betrayal · Short fiction

She Faked a Coma to Test Her Gold-Digger Bride-to-Be — Then Caught Her Wrist Mid-Air

She Faked a Coma to Test Her Gold-Digger Bride-to-Be — Then Caught Her Wrist Mid-Air — Part 1
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The Winter Garden Trap

The rain streaked down the tall glass panes of the penthouse winter garden, blurring the twilight blue sky into a wash of silver and gold. Inside, heated marble floors glowed softly beneath the bonsai trees, and the air smelled of jasmine and wet stone. It was a scene of perfect serenity—except for the two people who were anything but serene.

Chloe-Mae stood beside the concealed titanium safe, her white cocktail dress immaculate, her tiara sparkling under the warm uplighting. She had just punched in the code Catherine had foolishly left on a sticky note by the bed. The safe clicked open, revealing a royal diamond tiara that had been in the Delacroix family for four generations.

She Faked a Coma to Test Her Gold-Digger Bride-to-Be — Then Caught Her Wrist Mid-Air

"Finally," Chloe-Mae whispered, her eyes gleaming with greed. She lifted the tiara case with both hands, cradling it like a newborn. Then she glanced over her shoulder at the bed where Catherine lay—supposedly comatose after a sudden "stroke" three days ago. The doctors had said she might never wake up.

Chloe-Mae had not wasted a single minute.

Little Ruby, six years old, with a flower-girl dress and a torn ribbon in her hair, stood at the foot of the bed. Her big brown eyes were red-rimmed from crying. "Please don't take Grandma's tiara," she whispered, her voice cracking.

Chloe-Mae's nostrils flared. She set the tiara case on the marble table, then turned to Ruby with a sneer that made the child shrink back. "Stay down on the floor," she snapped, her voice slow and venomous, each word deliberate. She pointed a manicured finger at the rug. "And don't you dare move until I'm done here."

Ruby's lower lip trembled. She looked at her grandmother, hoping for some sign—a flutter of an eyelid, a twitch of a finger. But Catherine lay perfectly still under the satin duvet, her silver-streaked hair fanned out on the pillow, her burgundy silk wrap dress hidden beneath the blanket. To Chloe-Mae, she was just a breathing obstacle. To Ruby, she was everything.

"Please stop being so mean!" Ruby sobbed, stepping between Chloe-Mae and the bed. Her tiny fists were clenched, her tears rolling down flushed cheeks. "Grandma is sick! You can't take her things!"

Chloe-Mae laughed—a cold, brittle sound. "Sick? She's half-dead, sweetheart. And when I marry your daddy, this whole penthouse will be mine. That old woman's money will be mine. And you? You'll be shipped off to boarding school so far away you'll forget you ever had a family."

She raised her hand, palm open, ready to slap the child across the face.

Ruby squeezed her eyes shut.

But the blow never came.

Instead, there was a rustle of satin, a whoosh of air, and the sound of feet hitting the heated marble floor. Chloe-Mae's wrist was caught in an iron grip, mid-swing, so tight that the bones ground together.

Catherine Delacroix stood beside the bed, fully upright, her eyes wide open and blazing with icy fury. She had thrown off the duvet in one fluid motion. Her burgundy wrap dress flowed around her like a queen's robe.

"Take your hands off her," Catherine said, her voice low and commanding, every syllable a threat.

Chloe-Mae's face went white. Her mouth opened, but no sound came out. Her eyes darted to the bed, then back to Catherine, as if she were seeing a ghost.

"You—you were—" Chloe-Mae stammered.

"I was testing you," Catherine said, her voice cold as the rain outside. She released Chloe-Mae's wrist and reached into the pocket of her dress, pulling out a folded document and a small remote control. "And you failed. Spectacularly."

Ruby gasped, her tears turning into a hiccup of disbelief. "Grandma? You're not sick?"

Catherine knelt down and pulled Ruby into her arms, pressing a kiss to the top of her head. "I'm not sick, sweetheart. I'm just very, very smart." She straightened up and held the document in front of Chloe-Mae's ashen face. "This is my doctor's staged test report. And this—" she held up the remote, "—is the camera that recorded every single thing you've done and said for the last three days."

Chloe-Mae's knees buckled. She grabbed the edge of the marble table to steady herself. "You can't do this," she whispered. "You're old. You're sick. You were supposed to be—"

"I faked this entire coma," Catherine said, her voice slicing through the air. "And now, my dear, you're going to pay for every cruel word, every sneer, every time you raised your hand to this child."

As if on cue, the glass doors to the winter garden burst open. Two uniformed police officers rushed in, handcuffs already drawn. Chloe-Mae screamed and tried to run, but the officers were faster. They snapped the steel cuffs around her wrists with a satisfying click.

"Get out of my house," Catherine said, her arm wrapping around Ruby's shoulders. Ruby smiled through her tears, clutching her grandmother's hand.

Chloe-Mae was dragged away, her tiara falling from her hair and clattering on the marble floor. Catherine picked it up, dusted it off, and placed it gently on Ruby's head.

"There," she said softly. "That's where it belongs."

But the night was not over. As the police car's lights faded into the rain, Catherine's phone buzzed. It was a message from her son, Jack, who was on a business trip in Paris.

"Mom, I'm landing in an hour. Can't wait to see you. And I have something important to tell you about Chloe-Mae."

Catherine's blood ran cold.

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And I have something important to tell you about Chloe-Mae."Catherine's blood ran cold.